All Comments on 'Test of Five'

by RallyWeasel

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tentaclelovinggirltentaclelovinggirlover 14 years ago
Loved it

Please let there be a sequel!

HandcuffGirlHandcuffGirlover 14 years ago
Great Story

Great Story RallyWeasel! ! I'm so glad you found literotica.

Bethany

Search for stories by handcuffgirl to read the sequel.

keairankeairanover 14 years ago
Great

Would love to see an alternate version where she fails the final test.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Keep trying!

A very original premise, and an ingenious plot. But the "victim" remains curiously untouched by her progressive erotic entrapment. So the story is essentially a series of rather clinically elaborated sex acts, and ultimately unsatisfying. "A" for effort, "C" for arousal.

DedeMDedeMover 14 years ago
Great start!

Loved the premise from start to finish...hope there's more coming!!!! Dede

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
great

I love this story and the only thing that can make this better is if you expanse on it a little more like adding more captive stories

mercianknightmercianknightabout 11 years ago
That was Fun

well done

LunaWindLunaWindover 10 years ago
Almost

The story just ends too abruptly. What happens after she wins? What is her new life like? Does she even leave? I just feel like there are too many possibilities of what happens next that are not explored or alluded to leaving the story feeling unfinished.

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