All Comments on 'Texas Heat'

by Plautus69

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huedogghuedoggover 12 years ago
it's a little to late to have issues now

you wanted him to fuck your wife, now she will want more and in the end you don't like it.....to bad, next chap..her planned gangbang

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I, I, I, I, ....How many "I's" does it take to start paragraphs and ruin a tale?

Poorly written. Author needs course in writing. Just a poor reflection of a JPB story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
buy a gun for yourself or mark

another dumb cocksucker.

BillPorterBillPorterover 12 years ago
BIG COCK!!!!!!!!

Your wife has already told you, by her actions, that you are not needed anymore. She wants that "BIG COCK" again and again. You are going to be replaced, you bloody fool!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Mark is no longer homeless

He has a home anytime she want him.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderover 12 years ago
Really?

Really?! Another "willing cuckhold" story? Please, don't bother.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Another patheic author

Not again! Another author who willingly immasculates the man and makes it OK for a woman to be a slut. I wish for once an author would let the man keep his self-respect and just make her a common slut.

bigguy323bigguy323over 12 years ago
You'd save yourself a LOT of low votes if you mentioned GAY and CUCKOLD in your description.

Better yet, post under GAY or FETISH.

adgeonadgeonover 12 years ago
1* star

Story about a straight man turns gay is NOT what I'm looking for in LW section.

Harryin VAHarryin VAover 12 years ago
wow this was really good ...

the only thing that would of made this story better would be if the author blew his head off with a handgun

deadonedeadoneover 12 years ago
Lame

Who is more stupid the author, the husband, or the reads (myself included) for reading this turd.

But at least there is some reality in that the wife now sees the husband as useless and wants to move on.

chytownchytownover 12 years ago
What Were!!!!!!

You thinking submitting this story to L W. This section will cut you up and flush you down the toilet. Bad Idea!!!!! Good luck on future stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
1*(Non-erotictrollbait)

WTF? Cuckold+wimp+pathetic+whorebitch+cuntskank+GAYfuckedupstory=1*

clearlakequeenclearlakequeenover 12 years ago
Nice!

Yes, I remember all the doubts the first time a big strong real man satisfied my wife. All the cuckold emotions, jealousy, also very embarrassed seeing a man take your wife to heights you never could. Then realizing a stirring inside you of your submissive side liking the beta male role.

Really enjoyed the emotional roller coaster you described and I will be waiting for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Suggestion

Kill yourself, do not hesitate, die and go directly to hell.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I was never a pervert or gay. Until now.

Great self-diagnosis...and accurate as well!

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Both

You have to be a pervert and gay to write this mess.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
BLAH...

THIS STORY HAD "YUCK" WRITTEN ALL OVER IT. NOW THE GUY IS ASKING TO COME BACK FOR MORE AND HIS WIFE IS FEIGNING SLEEP. HOW COULD ANYTHING GO WRONG?

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