All Comments on 'TGI Chronicles Pt. 2 Ch. 02'

Dave sort of reminds me of the title character in the movie Alfie. However, he doesn't seem to be a cad like the movie character. I hope it doesn't blow up in his face. I look forward to more.

Boyd

you have us hanging on the edge already. Every time Lucy shows up, my stomach gets tied up in knots. She’s already like a walking disaster waiting to explode and destroy any and all around her. You’d think Dave would have enough experience and wisdom to see this coming ten miles away. You’ve written one big weakness into Dave’s character, his dick, once it gets hard, he seems to lose all good judgment and sense. Sounds like a lot of men I know in real life, including myself 30 years ago. Looking forward to chapter three. A fan always.

Sme of the dialogue has a chuckle in it. Also, interesting. Can't imagine just where you're going with this saga of Dave. Sounds like Tim could be in trouble, again, somehow, or Dave could be in a lot of trouble.

Will wait for the direction.

Just great, like TGI 1.

I like the characters and still wonder where it is all going to end, lots of twists.

Congrats. Fascinating Sequel. Four out of five. I wasn't even sure if I was going to read part two. But I really, really like getting to see Tim and Beth from another perspective. ie. Dave's. The author is a good writer and while Dave's story isn't usually my cup of tea, I am enjoying that too. The sex scenes are well written and I really liked hearing Beth talk about how tough Rose was on her. I now regret giving one of the part one chapters a two. I was angry at Rose at the time. Cheers. Steve

thinking I would not enjoy Dave's story. I am really enjoying it - probably bcs it has so many characters from Part 1. Doesn't Lucy have two small children? I wonder where she hides them when she sees Dave.

I’m really sorry but this is like listening to a bunch of immature adolescents bickering about their first kiss. I’ve never read a story where so many so called adults air their dirty laundry in public. Grow up for goodness sakes.