by boredbody08
i liked it...it was really different than most of the stories i've read here...good luck writing in the future.
I agree that it was a different take on things, but a very good job of it. A pleasure to read. thank you.
It was a pleasant story! looks like life do have happy endings :D
Like title says, story is much better than ratings. Interesting story line, but got lost a couple times. I think that may be why you took a ratings hot . Do more writing please, you are a worthy storyteller. Thanks