All Comments on 'Thank You, Heather Ch. 01'

Being Canadian it's nice to get actual landmarks that I know. Keep the story going eh

Excellent first story! I look forward to the next installment.

What a pleasure to read a story on this site by someone who actually knows what proper grammar and punctuation are. You make the characters seem like real people and the sex is hot.

One tiny nit to pick: Mentioning bra cup size and inches of dick is unnecessary and a turn off, at least for me. Other than that, well done!

I loved this story and can't believe it was your first. I can hardly wait for the second.

Great story, well written and paced, loved all the description loved the reactions, just needed a bit better reading before posting , just a couple of words left out, made me reread some bits to make sure I had it right.