All Comments on 'Thanks for the Memories'

<center>Brilliantly told story, the way you broke up the narrative and revealed the details piece by piece was brilliant.

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The only improvement I could suggest would be a little more focus on your characters' physical appearance, but that is purely down to personal taste!

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Over all, a cracking story, I hope to read many more in the near future!<br>xxxxxxxxxxxxx