All Comments on 'That 70's Show-New Years Eve Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
family fun

How about a forman family orgy

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Damn! This was Hot and amazing. I had no problem pretending all the characters were there!

Favorites parts included the Red and Kitty session. I am truly amazed at how well you keep them in character and giving us a glimpse into their active sex life was awesome! I'd love to read more! Then when Donna joined in, hot hot hot!! The three of them should get together more often,

Also a great part with Hyde and Kitty fucking the the bathroom, a fuck that's been waiting to happen for a long time now. And finally when Hyde shoves his cock inside tiny Jackie along side Fez, making sure she had enough cock. Awesome.

The whole story was great but those were my favorite parts! Thank you for writing it! I hope you have more 70s stories in store!

-J.

GialinaGialinaover 9 years ago
WELCOME BACK!!

First off welcome back! It's so great to see you writing again and this story was INCREDIBLE. I have to say the part with the Red and Kitty and Donna threesome was the hottest and I'm hoping it's just a sneak peak of what's to come with the romantic weekend story that had been pitched at you, because if it is wow! It's gonna be awesome! Great scenes like we saw here, Red fucking Kitty and Donna, Donna licking Kitty's pussy maybe in the romantic weekend story we can see Kitty licking donna, some girl on girl stuff before Red joins the fun maybe even getting to do one of them up their ass. I think it's a great story idea and you write these characters perfectly. Never fail to disapoint. Thank you for this story!

alyak46alyak46over 9 years ago
Review

This story was amazing! I'm glad that you are back to writing and the way you included all of the characters was terrific! Everyone was very well written but most especially Red, Kitty, Donna, and Fez, Hyde and Eric too. I'm really in awe of how you wrote the Red and Kitty sex scene, it ws intamite but incredibly sexy. You showed how they not only still loved each other but still were very hot for each other. I would love to see more stories with them, maybe a story where they role play or use toys and handcuffs, maybe another threesome. The one with Donna here was extermely hot. It's be great to see more of that! Maybe with Donna again or Jackie or even Hyde. The Hyde and Kitty bathroom scene was also another hot one. It sounds like Kitty's nursing days were pretty naughty, you could do a story of Kitty telling Red a story from back then, getting him nice and hard or have a storywhere she teaches Donna what she learned in nursing school. Sorry for throwing many ideas but this story was just a surprise to find and i'm still excited to see you back! Thank you and amazing job!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story

Hyde and kitty going at it in the bathroom with her sucking him off and him sucking her nipples was the hottest.

Write more please

Cloudy247Cloudy247over 9 years ago
Awesome.

This story was awesome. It was unexpected and a great surprise. i loved how you had all the characters there and all the different pairings. I especially loved the threesome with Red and Kitty and Donna. I really hope we will see more of this in the Romantic Weekend idea i told you about long ago, i haven't forgotten and what you have here was so hot! It would be awesome to read more of the three of them going at it. You write these characters so well i hope you write more soon! Happy New Year and thanks for the great story!

GialinaGialinaover 9 years ago
Suggestions

I just had some suggestions for the romantic weekend episode story, i know i sent some a long time back but after reading this story i think it should be alot like what you have here in the Red/Kitty/Donna threesome just maybe a little more detailed plus maybe a few of this...

Kitty licking Donna's pussy

Scisoring between Donna and Kitty

Kitty and Donna sharing Red's monster cock, both licking and sucking it together.

Donna and Kitty sucking each others nipples and getting Red to do the same

Kitty or Donna eatting the other out after Red has come in them.

Just some sugestions ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Encore!

Really great story! You capture the characters better than anyone I know and the sex parts are incredible. Great pairings too, I liked the Donna/Red/Kitty, Hyde/Kitty and Fez/Donna most just missing Red/Jackie.

I hope you write another story like this soon. I saw in another posting you didn't have anything planned in the immediate future but I am so hoping that changes sometime soon.

There arent any other 70s show stories like this being written and even the non erotic ones like on AO3 are not in this good or this in character.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

This ones my favorite so far! Loving the threesomes with Donna and the Formans and nice work with the Eric and Laurie too and even adding Bob. He was less annoying here lol keep writing these stories please, they rock!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

you own 70's show

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