by Dirk1234
I loved this story I hope you write a sequel. I feel.this can be a classic well done sir
Very well written and great story had similar experience but never had the chance to get that far only in my thoughts.
Watch your homonyms. Polka dots, not "poke a dots." Feat, not feet. There are a few more.
The very last statement, "the greatest lover she'd ever had," is a big much. They're both drunk, lonely, and touch starved. After the teasing, any sex was going to feel fulfilling in that moment, but calling him the greatest lover she'd ever had is way over the top and eyeroll inducing. The story was fine without such an exaggerated proclamation to close it out. You lost me with that final sentence.