All Comments on 'That's What Friends Are For'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
fantastic story

I loved this story I hope you write a sequel. I feel.this can be a classic well done sir

DINGDONG33DINGDONG33over 1 year ago

Very well written and great story had similar experience but never had the chance to get that far only in my thoughts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

James or Jules? Names are confused. I suggest you get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Watch your homonyms. Polka dots, not "poke a dots." Feat, not feet. There are a few more.

The very last statement, "the greatest lover she'd ever had," is a big much. They're both drunk, lonely, and touch starved. After the teasing, any sex was going to feel fulfilling in that moment, but calling him the greatest lover she'd ever had is way over the top and eyeroll inducing. The story was fine without such an exaggerated proclamation to close it out. You lost me with that final sentence.

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