All Comments on 'The 109th Rule of Acquisition'

It's fine as a mildly titillating star trek fic... It's a snooze as an erotic story - not because it lacks sec specifically, but because there is no chemistry OR sex. You must have at least one to make the characters interesting OR get us off... Especially to make us want More.

Lacks detail. Feels more like a clinical summary of events rather than actual events happening. The detached why that the narrative goes without dialogue and the way nothing is described makes it extremely lacking in any eroticism. The premise is good, as it's an idea I'm surprised I haven't seen done before considering Ferengi culture around women wearing clothes. This story couldn't been a real gem had you written it as a description of the events like a proper narrative erotica, rather than a detached summary of events with no details or descriptions.