All Comments on 'The 5th Floor'

Fucking hot. Why cant that happen to me?

..... WHO CARES? What a hot story. I'd like to hear more about what develops with these two. Perhaps in the next chapter, they can go to the top's home and meet some of his friends for a gang-bang!

I wish I worked in an office like that! Great story. I loved the way the story built to the climax in flashback. You could see the step by step process leading him to submit to his Master. It makes it all more believable.

nice work, my friend.

you can not only write a great sex fantasy but you can write! that was the most intense, hardon read and relief i've had in a long time. thanks

I'm all hot and bothered. Thanks!

I've come twice and not yet reached the bottom of the first page. Hotter than hell.

Your stories absolutely rock my world!

omg.....this is the most erotic story I have ever read. I fantasized myself in ur place....the imagery of your family & then you being a cockslut is just immensely synchronized..

Damn sexy story- Gotta point out though that what's also a sin is a woman getting married if she isn't a virgin. Says she'll get killed for doing that.

I want to go to the 5th floor!

Super story. I liked that the protagonist was not a wimpy guy, but still could not resist dropping to his knees and sucking cock and then submitting to a buttfucking. I bet there are an astonishing number of otherwise straight married white guys who would do the exact same thing and suck cock when presented with the opportunity. I think most straight guys secretly want to suck and take cock up the ass, they just need someone to make them do it.