All Comments on 'The 80/20 Solution Ch. 05-06'

by TexasFarmBoy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
looks

like a fucked up set up who will end bad for most couples involved and just one maybe 2 get exactly what they want. the players in the group who give a shit about the rest really.

so this will end with no fun for all, pretty sour. your up for no good and I don't like that, neither in reality nor in fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
BUILDING BETTER WITH EACH NEW SET OF CHAPTERS

I've been rolling along with your series since day one and really do enjoy your work. Characters are sharply defined, and I think the motives each player are solid too. OK so the group may or may not exist in "a real world," but I don't sweat the small stuff. You are entertaining me and that is all I expect. Thanks for writing.

Romantic1Romantic1almost 11 years ago
Great story line

Sexy. Erotic. Suspenseful. Great characters.

Five stars all the way.

Keep it up.

R1

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great idea

Great way to have your cake and eat it too ... we hope.

WoodencavWoodencav12 months ago

Wow, if only I had been so brave. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Falstaff60Falstaff60about 2 months ago

So. organized cheating. Could also be called swingers under another name. These relationships almost never last the distance. At some point someone catches serious feeling or jealousy. This author seems to have a fascination with cheating. I'm out.

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