All Comments on 'The Abduction Team'

Feel good story, with good character development...don't say that about too many stories here! Cheers!

I usually don't like the longer stories, I like to get to the point, but I read this one from start to finish and was a little sad that it ended. It had a great build up, and plot, good job.

Great story! Liked the characters and the plot.

Where is this team? :-)

I have been reading stories from this site for a few months now. And never has one captured me like this. I could imagine being with these men. Could feel the sadness of not seeing them again. A truely great storie. Thanx. Stormingcrow ps. I cant wait for ur next one.

I'm jealous of your talent!

keep on writing. you got the talent to entertain. you just gave me what I expect from a five star story.

wow not only are they mega hot and amazing in bed, but they are also caring! these guys are my one true love haha all four of them!

if there is a real team like this out there, please take me!

was really well written and that is really important for me to fully enjoy it.

i have the desperate urge to be filled in all three holes right now.

thanks for your nice comments - it's my first attempt at a story, and I will be submitting another one about "the team" soon:)

Proofread. Edit.

Page one, her hair is auburn. Page two, it's dark golden blonde. Which is it?

Continuity.

There are some damn clumsy phrasings as well ("he put it toward her head"? Really?). Keep working on it, and read some good lit from the past to get the hang of writing well.

OMG. This deserves TEN stars☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

Would love to spend three days with these four guys. Fantastic and creative story. Look forward to reading more of your stories.

This is a seriously enjoyable and touching story. Not many other stories in this section have given me this kind of enjoyment. I wish this author was writing more.