All Comments on 'The Accidental Master Ch. 01'

by Sir Galahad

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Azrael556Azrael556over 16 years ago
Great piece of work

Sorry I missed it at the time, but I was in the CENTCOM AOR. It earned a beer if you're ever this way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good one

Loved the story arc.

Azrael556Azrael556over 11 years ago
Still one of the best things I ever read on here...

Damn, I wish there had been a #4.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
WOW

This is a hell of a great story you've started here, can't wait read the rest of it.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Interesting premise.

But far too much whipping, serious pain, and blood -- for me at least.

Sex -- or what I;d call sex -- was pretty much totally absent.

Three stars.

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I believe that it is possible to write erotica that has a plot; that erotica, properly crafted, can be an art form. Sex should be part of the plot, not just the object of the exercise, in anything other than a short intended to incite lust. I'm pleased that people out there e...

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