All Comments on 'The Addition of Lillian Ch. 1'

Loved it, loved it. Wonderful story. One of my favorites as far as pace and descriptive quality.

Well, surely, we will meet Lilian again...?

I enjoy reading stories like this, that are largely from a female point of view. I did not enjoy that the story was written to James who was a main character in the story and would there fore already know the story. With the way you sometimes throw in a little of Lillian's perspective I think it could have been better written as if you were telling someone the story who wasn't there.