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All Comments on 'The Adele Train'

by RunnerGuy3

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
RUBBISH

A ridiculous story, poorly written with some spelling mistakes. Don't give up your day job.

RunnerGuy3RunnerGuy3over 15 years agoAuthor
My appologies

So, I just skimmed the story and realized it is riddled with type-o's. Horrible. Sorry guys. I'll def have to get someone to proof read it next time. I'm not sure how to fix it now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good

a great first try carry on

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Dammit, I don't care how TRUE it is or isn't.

IF you can't spell 'aUreole' right then why bother telling it?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

wish it was me..............so hot..........

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

wow too bad she was caught that sounds really good

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