All Comments on 'The Adventure Series Pt. 01: A Rogue's Misstep'

My only criticism is that some of it felt a bit rushed and could have benefited from some additional description.

Thanks I appreciate it, I have more coming!

This a very creative and interesting story. Thank you for your effort. I am looking forward to further episodes. Your work could be helped by a good editor. Cowboy100

Your description of the main character as a lowlife adventurer who routinely betrayed her fellow adventurers for financial gain turned me off her and I didn't care what happened to her so I just skipped through the story and won't bother with part 2.

This story was creative and the character felt real enough, you're too critical. It's funny how they got revenge on each other.