All Comments on 'The Adventure Series Pt. 01: A Rogue's Misstep'

This story was creative and the character felt real enough, you're too critical. It's funny how they got revenge on each other.

Your description of the main character as a lowlife adventurer who routinely betrayed her fellow adventurers for financial gain turned me off her and I didn't care what happened to her so I just skipped through the story and won't bother with part 2.

This a very creative and interesting story. Thank you for your effort. I am looking forward to further episodes. Your work could be helped by a good editor. Cowboy100

Thanks I appreciate it, I have more coming!

My only criticism is that some of it felt a bit rushed and could have benefited from some additional description.