All Comments on 'The Afterparty'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice!

Hell yes! I like this story! I'm a submissive in a bdsm relationship and I wish that women would trust their men enough to try and enjoy things like this.

Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very hot fantasy.

Liked it but thought it was a bit too drawn out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great Stuff!!! Really Had Me Going!!!

Nice story. Well written. Felt like I was the one being penetrated.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Only One Story? Write More! Please!

I made this journey of discovery myself. It took something extreme for me to understand what I really needed. This took me right back to the beginning. Ahhhhh, memories...

LadyPartsLadyPartsover 11 years ago
Very Erotic

I thought this story was extremely erotic, which is surprising because I absolutley HATE orgasm denial, tease and denial or edging. All those hands and mouths and big fat cocks, yummy. I don't get the denial appeal. It's like tasting the very best wine, swirling it in your mouth, breathing in the bouquet, then being forced to spit it out.

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