All Comments on 'The Amulet Ch. 01'

I disliked the main character and felt sorry for Tabitha.

Please keep writing - hope there's more to come :)

It is a great start but it has been 7 years. Are there more chapters to come?

but you leave it un-finished what happens next and does Jack get

other women to fall under the spell of his Amulet.

hes going to a university with alot of possibilities.

im jealous... id love to be that girl...

More more more

So, where's chapter 2, 3, 4... :) This was a very steam and sexually charged tale. You left it open for lots more the way you described the amulet glowly as the friends engage in, and finish, their sexual conquest together!

More! More! More! ;)

Well written, erotic. Anxiously awaiting next chapter.

Well written & believable.

Please keep this one going, it's got lots of promise. You are a very good writer. P.S. I'm glad he didn't take her again in the alley while she was asleep.

Well written, erotic. Anxiously awaiting next chapter.

Thank you Textguy84.

very good job, can't wait to read the next part of the series!