All Comments on 'The Apartment Complex Tenant Susan'

I didn't have the patience to finish it. Sorry, but you could seriously do with some help on the language bit.

have you not got a spellchecker???

Delightful laid back style, atmospheric,lightly sketching in the scene and leaving the reader to paint in the detail. very good lets have more there's a lot of appartments

Sorry, but I agree with the second and third comments!

As a writer, you DON'T have it! It's not likely you'll ever GET it, either. You'd have to go way, way back in school to get the basics of grammar - you know, putting two words together, using proper punctuation, etc.