All Comments on 'The Aphrodisiac Compound'

Great job. I hope you write more.

the "Kevin" and "Keven" kind of ruined it a little. Other than that, nice story!

keep going, more to write here!

Nice pace.... excellent foundation....

Let's see more of the mind control this section is titled under next time... actual penetration and unstoppable orgasms INSIDE lab partners...

Good detailing and nice juxtaposition of one very small-tittied girl beside one well-breasted young woman... are you going to include Natalie??...what about girl-on-girl fun?? (Katie especially seems up for just about anything!! LOL)

Good array of elements from which several chapters could emerge!! Keep writing!!

Really enjoyed this.

Hope there is more to come

I do hope we get to hear about the great sex they are about to have. Should be a great part 2

a unique story line. Well written and I loved it. Next chapters please.

If only that was a real compound...boom...instant millionaire ...

It was really good. Maybe you can add one where they also include Erin's sister.

Really enjoyed the story, one of the best I have ever read, very hot

Please becareful to keep consistancy though. you write as if Erin is innocent, yet produces a bag of dildos & lube - this bit did not seem to fit with the overall story. However not to distract from a very hot story. Thanks.

Can't wait for part 2 .. its one of the best I have read. Just enough back round and great charactor detail. I can really imagine it happening!

I have been looking for part 2 cant wait

We are waiting. . .please

Just wanted to add my voice to those requesting part 2. I can't wait to read it, and more stories from you!

I really loved this story. I cannot wait for part two. maybe you could address why the researchers said that the comppound did not work or maybe the compound does work it just needed to be set aside for a period of time to make it effective. im not going to tell you how to write it because you are doing a bang up job with this story. i just wish i could find this stuff on the market!!!!!!! part 2 please

So good, thanks

excellent.

part two would be great!!!!!!!!!! hint hint hint

You can't stop there. This story must continue. Excellent job (so far).

More please- just loved it !

Jack

Great story, thanks for sharing it with us. Since the "we need moar" comments started in 2011 and it hasn't shown up yet, maybe it won't be happening, and that's sad. Since this is in the 'mind control' section, I think it would be cool if Natalie were asked to smell the "perfume" bottle. After a good whiff, the four of them them could enjoy watching her reaction, and three of them could help her as she succumbs to the affects.

This, as well as your readers, begs for more!

asianToy

This is such a great story. The part I am really talking about is the library section and how the lust takes over Erin. I even have a perfect person who would play her in a movie.

Please do a part 2, foursome sex please

I really liked this and woukd love to read more. Is there any more to come?

Perfect balance between first-time innocence and "letting it all hang out". Out there and quite plausible. Nice hot writing.

This could be a lot better if they helped each other directly.