All Comments on 'The Apprentice Ch. 04'

by srlmort

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nomoretears00nomoretears00over 13 years ago
Loving this story

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Marbles29Marbles29over 13 years ago
Confused

I love it. But is it just me or is there a chapter missing??

curvy31fcurvy31fover 13 years ago
greattttt

great so far...can't wait to read more. I was wondering is there a chapter missing? or is just me..keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
whhhat?

wheres chapter 3?

srlmortsrlmortover 13 years agoAuthor
Not sure what happened

Author - Michael Mandrake -

I thought I was doing Lit a favor by breaking it up. I will email them and see what happened.

Thanks

M.M

nivaninivaniover 13 years ago
Lost

Something is missing, but good story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

fucking hell ive just unloaded in my pants.? hot hot hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Too short

Why are Cumming in your pants nothings happening are we reading the same story.what a waste this story had so much potential

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