All Comments on 'The Arrangement Ch. 01'

hot! will she be able to stay awake next time?

Great read!

New fave. I will be checking back for more. Great story!

I like the first chapter. Keep it coming

Just wow a good wow cant wait for 2

Thanks everyone for the feedback. I'm having a bit of a time wondering how I want the next chapter to end up. I have an idea of where I want to go, it's just getting there will be the issue. I want the series to last a little while - so there will definitely be more chapters coming soon. I'm not sure if I did it, but I'd like to thank my editor Accents N Tattoos for helping me parse through the superfluous crap I usually spew to get to the nitty gritty (and completely juicy) parts.

great start can't wait to see what happens next.

Outstanding!!!!!!!!!!

I can't wait to find out what else is in store for these two. They have had an amazing beginning. I can just imagine how explosive and intense this story and their love will get. You have a good mind for what your readers want to read. Keep up the good work... I look forward to your next submission soon!

More please :-)

this recession is hard,keep it up I can't wait to read what happens next!

Love the story and I'm excited to read more!!! You're a very talented writer.

Can't wait to se where this story goes.

In most jurisdictions a sociology degree is not a qualification for a job in social work, which is a different discipline.

This is an interesting start to a story.

To the anonymous commenter on the separation between Sociology & Social Work: I honestly did not know that they were not considered one of the same. Unfortunately I speak from a lack of knowledge about the discipline of Sociology and the social work aspect. I had college friends who earned both their bachelors & masters degrees in the field and went on to do some counseling, and social work.

Right now, I have most of the second chapter complete, it's just getting all the nuts & bolts in the right places at this point...that and I'm being a bit of an ass & dithering on certain aspects of the story & how I want it to get where it needs to go...

I thank you for your insight & constructive criticism!

I like very much! Its funny in a hehehehe way, that Peter has finally got with a black girl. Well thats the imperssion that I got. Why hasnt he or didnt he get with a black girl before?

its too bad that he has to pay her though. I know in your story, its the recission and times are hard but it seems like he really likes her more than that. Anyway just wanted to ask how old is he? At first I thought late 30s now im thinking early 40s! As they say older men are hot lol!!!! So I'm guessing she must be in her lte 20s or something. Cant wait for the next chapter :-D

Very nice story...I hope there is more

KDSUNFIRE

Please post chapter 2 quickly

Thanks so much for the positive feedback. I do plan to continue their story, it will just take some time for me to be ok with where it is going before I post an update. Thank you for reading my work! I plan on getting the next update in by the end of next week (1.17.12).

All i have to say is i love your story that i check back everyday to see if it a update.

It is so good i have to read it over and over again.

Really interested to see where this story goes. It is well written and I am drawn in by the characters. Look forward to reading more!!!

Five.

Excellent, you have great talent.Thank you Bain

Peter makes me wonder about more than a few things. He clearly has a deep fantasy wish....check....willing to pay big bucks...check....Will we get some idea as to the history behind his desire?

Also, he wants to reman detached, but fucking like that leads to a degree of emotional attachment on one player's part. He also liked the idea of a pregnancy. Does he really want to not be connected to sweet Julie or what????

I like the way he is with her so sensual and very tactile....nice!!

you wonder what Peter's real goal is in the matter of Julianne. Why not just ask her out and began to court her I ask?

That about sums up Peter's intentions to be Julianne's in every capacity for as long as she'll have him LOL Dude is already pussy whipped; he better be with the way he went at her Woo...it was all kinds of delicious, I loved it....and the story as a whole.

OK he's definately weird and shady .....but shit I would love to have hundreds stuck to my ass after getting my rocks off. And he a cutie too.... I can't wait to see how this plays out.

I wouldn't mind getting 25 Gs for having some good sex with a man that wanted me as much as he wants juilianne. Having his baby is a different story

Desperate times call for desperate measures apparently at least she wouldn't have to tell anyone

I'm liking this a lot about to read the second chapter now thank you

Interesting

This story has been stolen by John Richson and rename "Eye of the Storm" it is now selling on Amazon in kindle and paperback. I have email the true author Quietmahoganystorm and reported the theft to Amazon. Please do not buy from this thief John Richson and please report to Amazon regarding this matter. Thank you Bain

Since she still has her own apartment, why has she been sleeping on a windowless bathroom floor?

A slightly (radically?) different take on the 'white knight and damsel in distress' story. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Good, but decade old unfinished series. Don’t bother…