All Comments on 'The Artifact Ch. 03'

I like the wayyou are buiding the story up . Thank you great start to this story.

When is the next one?? I loved this

If only all fantasy novels were this interesting. Then again, if it were i would be holed inside my bed room with a box of tissues for the rest of my life T.T

HURRY

Love the story so far. Can't wait to get more.

A little tittilation and a viable story line, I enjoy this more then most of the stories which tend to be short on plot and shallow in te sexual line.

I just read your bio, hope all is well, maybe didn't even have to have surgery. Hope to see the next chapters!

Where is the rest of it? Want a lot more, please.

p.s. You write like it is for a newspaper. It is all bulletized into bite sized pieces. Try relaxing and let it flow more from paragraph to paragraph. It doesn't have to be quite so distinct between each of the paragraphs.

Thanks for the stories and hope you get better soon!

Good ideas.

Good English.

I'm looking forward to the rest.

I loved this -- you've done superbly.

That said, it's been long enough - we need the next installment! I must know how he goes about actually fighting this evil guy, not to mention the "real danger" he's going to face.

Please please keep it up and get the next chapter out as soon as you possibly can.

Awesome storyline. Your story keeps building and building becoming more complex and I am loving every word of it. This latest chapter was less about eroticism and more about plot lines leading me to think that you are purposely taking me (the reader) someplace. Where is it you are going? I can't wait for this story to continue.

I am enjoying this epic tale of the struggle between good and evil, white knights vs. black forces, but mostly I enjoy the artifact's crew of sweepers which come and clean the residue and iron the sheets every time Jack and his harem head for the showers to share a round of wetwash BJ's.

Will Jack face multiple dark forces in years ahead? Will he become engaged in the epic struggle for civil rights in America and ride to victory between the sleek thighs of his own dark beauty(ies)?

Will Kathy and Julie be sent to dreamland every time Jack has to engage in a prolonged struggle with his legacy, or will Jack finally award either or both of them to his choice of breeder stock as a consolation prize? Perhaps Jack will start breeding them both to start his own dynasty?

Will Jack confront multiple dark forces concurrently? Will there ever be a dark force succubus? Will Jack ever play off multiple dark force elements against each other to rescue the world?

I will anxiously await the next chapter and hope there are multiple new rescues and seductions of fair and not so fair maidens around the world.

Please continue this story, it is one of the best I have read, Your combinig sex into the story line was superbly done.

I hope that you are able to continue this story line as I really enjoy reading it

I just couldn't stop reading this story. One of the best I have ever read. Please continue........

One of the best stories i've read in awhile. More!

Another great chapter for both this one and the chapter 2 :) keep up the great work :D

hopefully you will have another chapter up soon. It would sadden us all if you decided to drop this story or if you have lost your muse.

looking forward to chapter four!

I like the story line.. but you seem to have a habit of not finishing off a story!

You seem to like to leave them hanging with out closing them out.

I sure hope you finish off this story and your Ill always take care of you story line. I have enjoyed them both so far.

Will you please write a lot more of this story as it is one of the best stories that I have read thank you for the first three chapters.

Nice story. Its the best i've read so far in Literotica. I like the plot, its not too predictable and the sex is balanced on the story plot. Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!

Can't wait for chapter 4 and others, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

....do we get "more" of this GREAT story ? I

personally hope it evolves into a 15 to 30

chapter mega-adventure with a couple

sequels thrown in for good measure. You've

created a great storyline with well established

characters to take in any direction.

Thanks "Doc"

Like your dear Mr. Katz, you manage to make this story fun, interesting, and constantly sexy. You also manage to keep some pretty weighty themes in the foreground without beating us over the head with them. I cannot do what you do, so I insist that you continue.

This is superbly written. The sex is great but the storyline is what makes this exceptional. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

this story is one of the best that i have read on literotica. i am interested in where it will lead next!!!!!!!!! so please make a fourth part and fast!!!! please

this story is well thought

great story line

and want more

and hurry

I'm glad to see another chapter to this fine story. Looking forward to the next submission. As always with your work this is very good.

I'm giving you a 5 because you try to do the things a real writer should: character development and motivation, a "logical plot" (within the context of your story), and having fun! Keep writing.

i agree with ever one. Please wright more of this as soon as you can!

I really like your writing, story, and creativity. Not as keen on the harem-building. 4.5 stars is not an option.

I loved it and gave this chapter a 5 as this is the best series on this sight i ahve come across and trust me I ahve read thousands of the stories on here over the 10+ years I have known this site.

To clarify the title, I thought this was good, but chapters 1 & 2 were a lot better. Just a general better flow to the stories, where this one had a rushed feel to it. Will keep searching for The Artifact Ch. 04 but please take your time and make it as awesome as the first 2.

Domo arigato gozaimasu.

A very interesting story, please add more when you can, i find myself looking for your story before any others, keep it up ...Nova

Please more soon

I think it's a testament of your literary skill that I read this story for it's plot, and enjoy the sex on the side! That's almost a first for me on this site.

Thank you for the good read!

I love all your submissions keep up the great work. :)

for continuing this story. If its going to be another long interval before the next submission, I suggest writing a short synopsis; its annoying having to go back and read over the earlier chapters.

I'm so glad you came back to this story. I have really enjoyed it and am liking where things are heading so far. I waould have given you 5 stars except I had the oddest sense of deja vu for part of it. But I still think its great and am looking forward to more chapters from you. :)

a guy tried to write a story about being given power, sort of like this story here, by some highly advanced aliens who told the man they could do any thing for him, since they have studied the human race inside out... any thing he asks, they can give it to him. <p>

he didn't ask for money, gold, chemical formulas, equations that can assist physicists, knowledge about biochemical processes and viral replications and mechanisms, or any other such nonsense. no, he asks that the alines make his dick a few inches bigger, so he could fuck his unfaithful wife's ass and make her hurt! <p>

seriously? why do people write such nonsense? when you are offer knowledge of the universe --- from reading minds to being allowed to make wishes for great knowledge of the universe --- and you gather a few women and just fuck from one day to the next? LOL! <p>

the minds, the "creativity," of some of these "authors" boggle my mind sometimes...

I really am enjoying this story and I don't want to wait to long for the next chapter. Well done.

Brilliant! I have read all three chapters and love the way you built the story up! :) I can't wait for further chapters! :)

Got a New Girl. and a Job onstage.

Can't wait to see how it plays out after Good and Evil Fight.

your stories are the best on the site right now.give us more of them.