All Comments on 'The Assistant Ch. 04'

Loved it. it was sweet seductive sexy n all.

i wont more of u .

I don't believe there's anything on this website quite like what you've written, at least in terms of writing style. You seemed so removed from your characters, I felt like I was walking around in Karla's tunnel vision for four chapters. I kinda liked it. Different, very different, but good.

it seems like it just...stopped.

Unfinished somehow

I cannot believe that any author would put this much effort into a wonderful story and just stop, no ending just leave you hanging. It has been 18 years since this was published, but it appears this author no longer publishes here.

I give it a 5 for writing but a 1 for not finishing it.