All Comments on 'The Audit Ch. 01'

...you'd get an ed to go over your story and picked out those glaring mistakes, like wrong usage of words... whoever heard of having a 'taught stomach' I didn't know our abs can 'teach'. So, if you want good rating get an ed, will you?

Please continue. Its been a while since there's been a good office blackmail story here (or maybe I've missed them). Last one I liked was Grantlee's Julie's Mistake. Hope this one goes further than this single chapter.

The following chapters will be the judge of this nice little story. Don't fuck it up, and have this guy envolving her in gangbangs and such. OK a friend or two might be fun :)