by Jack_Norman
It happens more than you think
this stuff--Personally I would get excited seeing you all getting de-cocked
shit head it might happen, but I can't see anything erotic to it. I hope your fun will happen to you.
Whether this is your fantasy or based on factual situations isn't the point so much. It's well-written. There are other similar stories here that are poorly written smut. If you were going for a dark, ominous, evil tone, you achieved it. It reads like an excerpt from a bigger, entangling story and I'd be curious to read more. The characterizations were really well done for such a short story. Yes, evil...yes, intriguing. Thanks and continue writing, please.
Whether this is your fantasy or based on factual situations isn't the point so much. It's well-written. There are other similar stories here that are poorly written smut. If you were going for a dark, ominous, evil tone, you achieved it. It reads like an excerpt from a bigger, entangling story and I'd be curious to read more. The characterizations were really well done for such a short story. Yes, evil...yes, intriguing. Thanks and continue writing, please.
is there more chapters? marina story continued? or new girls alexandra gets.
Marina Jackson an English girl in a Russian school thinks she's auditioning for a part on stage. Instead, she's auctioned herself off into slavery. Short to the point with a surprise ending.
I was really surprised by how much I enjoyed this story, despite it not having any actual sex. Great idea!