All Comments on 'The Babysitter Did It Ch. 04'

Loved it!! It's too bad I started on chapter 4... Awesome man...good story!!

Great story... well-written and HOT... Thanks for sharing.

I just re-read what I posted. I submitted chapter 4 differently and therefore missed one final proofread and it shows. I counted about 9 grammar errors and 1 punctuation error. Sorry - hope it's not too distracting. I will look into re-submitting it with corrections.

Thanks for the comments so far.

This is a very hot story and great writing... Keeping it Coming!

A very good story. One of the best ones I have read lately.

This guy may not want a divorce but it's coming. Especially with all the risks he is willing to take. And there is no way Krissy is going to be okay living with just the fringes.

Poor clueless Janet. Just gave birth to twins and she's "no Krissy". Yeah okay bud. You try carrying twins, and not being 18.

It's building up to a point where Krissy is going to want more and more as well as Mr. A wanting more and more too.

Great work. I'm interested to see where else you take the story.

What's wrong with the chick? I hope she wasn't messed with too badly or too crazy cuz its just not sexy. Disclaimer: this is a personal opinion so if ur crazy or are attracted to crazy, more power to u. Lol

What's wrong with the chick? I hope she wasn't messed with too badly or too crazy cuz its just not sexy. Disclaimer: this is a personal opinion so if ur crazy or are attracted to crazy, more power to u. Lol

I really enjoy this story series. I have read it twice through. Please continue this story series.

Great story!! More chapters, please!!

I never left a comment before, but your 4 part series deserved a job well done. I hope there is a 5-6-7-8 coming later.

Didn't see this series the first time around, but since you added part 5 I'm really enjoying this :)