All Comments on 'The Babysitter's Surprise Ch. 02'

Loved the stories. Welcome! You have a great flair for stroke stories. It will be interesting for you to continue this series.

That was just as hot as the first chapter. Thank you for submitting this story it was absolutely delightful. Keep up the good work!

While I didn't leave a comment on Ch.1 it was great also. Both very hot and well written.

One recommendation. Leave out the 8 inch cock comment. Use descriptive phrases. "OMG it was beautiful and bigger then any other I had ever seen." or "I looked at his cock and shivered a little. It was so big and thick I wondered if I could handle it." or words to that effect.

In many cases when I read about 8" cocks or 38DD tits I just click the back button and find another story. In this case I'm glad I did not.

Thanks for two great stories.

Kick started my mind about my own hot little sitter. You have an incredible knack for keeping it focused, quick and just the right amount of detail. I do agree with the previous comment about size and all... maybe he does have an 8 incher... but it is a tad cliche... but don't let this detract from an impressive effort, I didn't ;).

Looking forward to your next story... what ever it may be.

Justin

I've never heard it described any better. You have a real flair for describing the sex scenes. Keep it up!

I want to thank you all again for your encouragement!

You my Dear are an amazing writer and I sense that you are the young lady in the story; you've made it so real. I enjoyed the pure desire of this Chapter 2 and I now read Chapter 3! I enjoy what and how you are writing about as it is exciting and hot. Thanks again.

I'm hoping that you will continue to fuck and that you will accidently get pregged by him.

What a wonderfully written story