by SexyJennay69
I like the way you describe the sex between Jake and Rachel in this chapter. You added some more insight into why Jake was going after Rachel and after his wife left him for the month. I can hardly wait for the next chapter and see how you develop the plot.
Great chapter!! I can't wait to read the next one. Keep up the great work.
You need to make the most of those 3 weeks, and knowing what you know now, make him a future Daddy.