by dlsloan
This was a great story.. I know some people didnt like it.. but for those that do like the story line.. it was a huge turn on..
Don't listen to the negatives. This is a great entry on the site and brings elements that I've not seen before. Keep up the frequency of submissions.
Ok...this story line about the dumbness of women and the idiocy of men who fantasize about it is just ridiculous. Try writing something slightly realistic next time, ok?