by BMYJC
...I think it would equally fit in the 'Mind Control' category (w/ Brian being the object of attention, and Lisa directing everybody).
I would have found it there quicker, instead of doing a 'New Stories' crawl (rarely have time to do that)
5 stars
It's really not Mind Control. No one is being controlled 'against their will'. There's no telepathy, serum, etc. so it's not mind control. This really was the best place to put it.
Good story though. Hope there's more.