by Andy5v
The word you want is "shuddered," not "shuttered." For god's sake, look it up. Don't post your stories until some literate friend has proofread them.
And then there's junk like this:
"I am saying that you like seeing my pussy because he keep staring at it…" HE keep staring at it?
Stop insulting your readers.
Carol had just had the greatest orgasm of her life... made by Sally oh yes go on