All Comments on 'The Beach Cottage Ch. 03'

This is an erotic story I like how all the hot stuff shows up on tape. Its clear Ray and Lisa are blackmailing these women and Kelley or her hubby is next. PLEASE don't end this with the hubby being a wimp and the wife being a cheating wifethink od an ending that blows this thing wide open.... revenge, the other men finding out about their wifes, jolline's baby real day ..her hubby would love to know about that

This could turn into a great story something along the lines he suggests or similar.

But, the probability of that happening in a literotica story is VERY small.

Authors here, except a select few have little imagination.

This author's previous stories would indicate a wimp husband is all we can expect.

Shame really with such a good introduction to great possibilities.

You may be quite surprised at the outcome. I have two installments left. You can't nor won't please everyone, so hopefully the twists that are in store will satisfy and stimulate your imaginations.

Again, we regret the mistakes in Ch.2. That was not the final copy and was sent prematurely. K&T.

Please surprise us with this story!! I still can?t believe Kelley hasn't have sex with Ray & Lisa before, but is sure will happen now!

If the wife is in the clutches of Ray and Lisa I hope he is in a position to ruin them, socially and financially.

I don't want his wife being some sex slave.

think he just fucked up his marriage and most probable his life. What a dickhead. TK

So he blew it... Now that bitch, Lisa, got to him. First off, why didn't he LOCK the DOOR before he started looking at the tapes again. She has him by the balls and is going to BLACKMAIL him to force Kelly to screw Ray and tape that session too. This is sick stuff. But am hoping that the good guys will prevail and Kelly will NOT turn out to be a slut.... But it's always on the writer to FIX this problem... 1 star.

This some dumb shit.