All Comments on 'The Beach House'

Strawberry wine? Pink champagne? Don't tell tell me, let me guess: the champagne glasses were made of fine....plastic? And they lived "happily ever after"??!!!

Maybe there was a good story concept buried in there. Somewhere.

-- KK in Texas

I DONT KNOW WHAT U MEAN BY "A STORY IN THERE SOMEWHERE". EVERYONE THAT READ IT BEFORE I SUBMITTED IT SEEMED TO LIKE IT. THE GLASSES WERE NOT PLASTIC AND THERE WAS NO STRAWBERRY WINE. THERE WERE STRAWBERRIES AND WINE, BUT NOT STRAWBERRY WINE. READ IT AGAIN!

I sure didn't find a story in there. It seemed as if it was written by a child who just watched a disney movie. And they lived happily ever after? Gag.

This is a nice, tender romance, but it should have been longer. The love scenes especially are too short, and would have balanced out the plot better had they been longer, something that could have easily been done given the talent of the writer.