by TxRad
TxRad you create hope for the rest of us 'old' farts. Hang in there and keep up the good work.
story again. you always succeed in creating an erotic atmsphere. you just don't get too fast to the in and out thing, but build up a very nice tension. makes one dream about taking part in the events...
This is one series that deserves a revisit of your writing skills & imagination; worth at least one or two more chapters or until they wheel Randy into an ER or the morgue...