by CoraJade
Sorry about friendship but love and lust come first, espically love. Do what you gotta do, but get the woman, She could be the mother of your children.
I don't usually comment on stories but I absolutely loved this one. I like the way the story develops. It's plausible and you can almost feel the connection the two have towards one another. Maybe it's because you have captured the essence of a relationship like this. After all we have all seen this in real life.
Beautifully written. You're a gifted writer, to bring out so much nuance about these characters and their relationships in such a short story, in elegant language, realistic dialogue, compelling narrative, all while also making the room to describe an incredibly hot fuck!