All Comments on 'The Best Lovers'

by CoraJade

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Take Jenny Home

Sorry about friendship but love and lust come first, espically love. Do what you gotta do, but get the woman, She could be the mother of your children.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great story

Thanks..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
outstanding

I don't usually comment on stories but I absolutely loved this one. I like the way the story develops. It's plausible and you can almost feel the connection the two have towards one another. Maybe it's because you have captured the essence of a relationship like this. After all we have all seen this in real life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
So Hot

A great story I can't wait for the next one

zornslemmazornslemmaover 3 years ago

Beautifully written. You're a gifted writer, to bring out so much nuance about these characters and their relationships in such a short story, in elegant language, realistic dialogue, compelling narrative, all while also making the room to describe an incredibly hot fuck!

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