All Comments on 'The Best Move I ever Made Ch. 03'

LIKE YOUR STYLE, AND WHERE THIS STORY HAS GONE SO FAR HOPE THERE IS MORE TO CUM.

Great Story, great writing, excellent situations, and there are so many more adventures and experiences to go. Don't force your situations, relax and let it flow. Terrific work

Good fun, lots of humor, both in the sex scenes and otherwise.

There are a lot of run of the mill stories out there. Yours certainly do not fit into that category. You are one of the few authors whose name I have written down so that I can follow their stories. Even, in a sense, you feel you know what is going to happen, the manner in which you write it is terrific.

Thanks

your mature stories are different with class and thank you.give us more of your fanasies.

You're keeping up the good work !!

What a fantasy story - love it !!

daughter is 16?

You need to keep the story going

Appealing grammar and a stilted style.

Good story but you said to be continued OK what year LOL