All Comments on 'The Big, Big, Big One'

Wow, just really ugly and stupid. Pretty Twisted mind to write that, and an ugly heart behind it I guess? Just pathetic.

Reading between the lines, this writer has some serious self-esteem and self-loathing issues. I sincerely hope he sought and received mental health services. Very disturbing read.

if my wife ever did this i would beat her with a baseball bat then set her ob fire

4 stars 🌟 if it works why not?

I would of liked to read the conflicting thoughts of both their minds when one of her better lovers or male friends would make humiliating comments. There isn't anyway other men in the pools playing, and at the BBQ's with him leaving early would not know.

Whenever MC is asked about his wife, who ran away with their neighbor, he feigns uncertainty and great sadness. In actuality, he sees their bagged bodies being dropped into the massive, deep foundation form for the north abutment of the new freeway bridge over Occidental Canyon. 'At least they're now together,' he reasons.

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My wife gave birth to a curly light-haired boy this past year, a fine son who looks nothing like me. ..

[As a year old, his flaccid penis already outsizes my erection. Soon he will know his endowment is much larger than most. As he enters puberty, he will understand the enormous advantage he has over other men. He will learn quickly how to use this to best advantage]....

Our sex life is better than ever, with obvious occasions of sloppy seconds.

if i had wife like that i would beat her with a baseball bat and that POS boyfriend would be dead. i would do him from a distance with a high powered rifle with a scope

I liked it! Fuck you guys! When we're out and I see a hot guy, I do my best to find out if he's interested and if so make the arrangements with hubby and off I go to fuck him for the night and who knows maybe the next day!

10 stars to the writer. So So familiar events to me. I had a Real Nympho as my wife #4 DD. Such a sweet wholesome looking woman. But what was the truth she could and would NEVER admit. Only upon my suspicions did I start to investigate by then I was hooked. Obviously she gave off pheromones that caused all men to be attracted strongly to her. She had them all the time. So many lovers but she would never share it was a constant heartbreak. Similar to our hero here, only my wife hid it well and constantly made me hate myself. Finally she left me for my best Friend so I even lost my drinking buddy at the same time. Praise the Lord I finally was able to get away from her before it killed me.

While such stories can be seen as fantasies , in reality there is evil wrapped in human flesh carrying out life killing acts. What exist in the mind can/will often exist in the way we live our lives. Men or women should never accept that attractions/acceptation's to sickness comes solely from the viewable of certain peoples, it is often the power that rules over them that is causing the other person desire from them. This power can reach across from person to person to effect them and destroy their life and others. Everything that's look good , mostly is not good.

Pretty well written cuckold story. Should be tagged accordingly.

Another husband written as a faggot

this is a very simple one- i would have killed my wife- i would most likely set beat her ass with a baseball bat then set her ass on fire and would have done this slowly

Great!

Another man hating female writing stupid anti-male garbage. I'm sorry I stumbled across this. I thought he would at least redeem himself in the end. Should have known better. Just another man hater

nasty whore and a queer wimp

Story wise written well. Subject matter was poor. Kill them both.

Anony said that he’d have just killed his wife, and her bull, after the first time. Well, that would make him single again, so it would be adultery when he was getting butt fucked in prison every day!

one has to be one sorry ass motherfucker to be a cuck and put up with a worthless whore wife. I read some of these sorry ass stories and think these are written by a cuck-another useless motherfucker like his wife

you see i simply would have just killed my wife after the first time. That simple. i hate worthless whore wives like in the story. i would have killed the bull as well

Double squik.

Take this crap over to the fetish page or put a cuck warning at the start so we dont waste out time on crap stories.

So many twisted writers on LW. Please take your crap to the fetish page and stop wasting our time.

Wasted my time

Intro please Cucky story and I won't read any more

Must have been a big one. This story certainly laid a big one.

Really? Write part 2 and give the husband some balls. He needs revenge in a big way.

What kind of special fool just whips his dick out to show it to the husband of the wife he's fucking? And NOT expect the husband to kick him in the balls? What husband DOESN'T kick him him in the balls? And what husband doesn't divorce his slut wife when he realizes she has no love or respect for him as demonstrates by her words and actions? I laughed out loud at the ending of this garbage. By the time she has a kid, she's divorced.Awful story telling.

Although this is just a story the reality is there are guys out there who really do like watching other men plowing their wives. However if it were me in that situation I would give my wife the big big big one it's called a divorce!

No more cuck crap

That's all

fag cuck shit.

"He often invited my wife and I down to his apartment..."

- He invited my wife

- He invited me

- He invited my wife and me

Is it that hard? No pun intended.

Hope the sex in this tale is better than these goofball pronoun errors.

pathetic waste of a no good cunt

bah

More crap. Some "people" if can be people are pretty sick in the brain to like this shit.

Glad u are no longer writing

Please write chapter 2 where hubby gets a spine and kicks the whore out. Now that would be a good read. Simple flash "After I get back from cutting his cock and balls off, you better be gone". See? not so hard to write an acceptable ending. 1.

Can tell written by a woman or a cuck, but written in a way to aggravate normal men an women, so goofy, very few would put up with a situation like this.

Why did you bother to write this cuck dreck. You could have written a plot that has been used less than a streetwalker. You could have added something erotic to the writing, instead it is just pathetic.

The husband is spinles chuck the basted fucking the wife would wake up withdick shoved up his ass and his balls in his mouth. THE WIFE WELL SHE DONT WANT TO STOP FUCKING THE BIG ONE WOULD WORKING THE GOOD OLE WHORE HOUSE SO SHE COULD HAVE ALL THE BIG SHE WANTS IN THR ROTTENEST PART OF THE I COULD THINK OF THE PIECE OF PUCK SHIT SHE IS , THE STORY SUCKS SO DOES THE WRITER..............

closet cuckolds are cockless wonder pukes smoking cock after cock between bleating and warbling about how much they hate hot wife stories, while reading thousands of them and wishing they had cocks to jack instead of smoke.

and proven fact that cuckolds are spineles, weak kneed wimps. They command no respect from their wives or the people banging her. They are a waste of man flesh. The husband in this story is a waste of man flesh.

Being a cuckold at heart with a very small penis, I can empathize. The guys who get mad are clearly not Beta. We enjoy seeing our wives happy and are not threatened by her happiness. I love when my wife flirts and jokes with her male colleagues at parties, etc. Others see she flirts. Is there more going on? I don't know. It is not about me. It is about my wife's happiness. I really enjoyed your story!

I really hate this story and others like it. I do believe in "to each his own"; and if this is your cup of tea so be it. I could NEVER be a willing cuckold.

Don't care why the other criticize this story, it got me incredibly hard. Imagining my own wife in his wife's place. Whew.

glad this asshole died by gagging on a "big, big, big one".

This one was easy to rate. First sentence told the story. No further reading required.

where is your self respect man? She was having an affair and you beat up her lover. She gets mad at you? Are you fucking serious? You actually still love her after she did you like that? How did your love for her not die? Do you honestly think she loved you as much as you lover her? Man, get your head our of your ass and man up! Have a little pride and don't be so fucking pathetic!!!

Have you bumped your fucking head? You are worse than the actual author! I have an idea, why don't you start thinking with your actual head instead of that little stiffy in your pants that nobody has ever seen except you! You comment leads me to believe you should get out of your moms basement on occassion!!!

I have an idea! Why don't you do all of us a favor and blow your own head off so we don't have to worry about sick fuckers like you ending up in the gene pool! You are a fucking faggot and a freak!!!

and cease being a wimpy cuck. TK U MLJ LV NV

to her because he had a fast trigger.. or another way to say it .. He was a one shot wonder?

This portrayal of the submissive husband is unpleasant and unrealistic. Fiction for sure. Others have covered most of the ground but I was so unhappy to have encountered the story, i have to comment. I cant believe the author skipped issues such as tHe "bull" character's behavior would end up with diseases that he would no doubt spread, the other wives relationships given how often they would conflict with the wife, the issues with the bastard chold and, of course, the husband's challenges being accepted in the neighborhood, etc

stay married to an unfaithful slut who has put him on the bottom rung of the ladder.

If he wants a slut wife, why not actually look for one that loves him.

But then i dont like cheating sluts sorry

SEXUALLY TRANSMITTED DESEASES

Any man that lets his wife have sex with anyone other than him runs the risk of these type of deseases. These deseases has been known to KILL.

So please think about that for while and ask yourself if this literature still arousing.

If it is then you are stupid. That is a fact and not a personal attack.

John

What a waste of time.

Either a man hating bitch or guy wanting to be a second hand gay

Story has been done more she has

Fucking rubbish!

Just another common, "Watching another man fuck my wife makes my dick hard."

The idea of another man fucking my wife without retronution is redickulous. My ex thought that she could cheat and make her own rules and as a result, the 11 dudes that she played with now have to sit when they pee because thier cocks are now living in a plastic bag. I often wonder what they tell women when they are approched for sex now . I guess they have to tell them they were stupid or somhing along those lines , But live and learn.

You need to write about a character who people can relate to.

I'm sorry but I just don't know anyone who is that pathetic.

Good grief, bigger dick? not really original.

Gets turned on by whatching the wife get fucked? Well ok, maybe someone out there could do it.

The curly haired baby, yea, right! I can't see anyone being happy in that situation.

Your writing is good, try another subject.

the wife is a slut, husbands a bitch and the writer is sick............lol

Are you a Limey? Seems to me you should be, limeys love being disgraced, cuckholded, disrespected and in general fucked over to the point it makes them as happy as a pig in shit. If you're not limey, why are you writing about a limey character?

RUDE AWAKENING...DUH

Could someone please explain how a whore can be "elegant?" Pathetic does not equal erotic, it's not that the author wrote poorly, it's just a lousy theme with a worse ending.

You need some SERIOUS help, and the sooner the better.

This husband has to be mentally ill...

Bad story, and some comments that are worse. Like the last commenter who wrote about how his "loving wife" left him after he beat the ass of the asshole she was screwing. Exactly why in hell would you love someone who dumped your ass and cheated on you with someone else? Where is your pride, dignity, self worth, self respect, etc? Love might be blind but it doesn't have to be stupid, and no amount of love puts up with that kind of disrespect and hate (c'mon, who cheats out of love?) Grow a pair, be a man, and find a real woman, because pining over a whore isn't real productive.

Your story reminds me of my insanity when I discovered my wife's affair with a big dicked neighbor. I beat the hell out of him. My wife was so angry she divorced me. I miss her and wish I had handled it differently. She is the only woman I ever loved. Iron MAN

Buy one, load it, place it against your wimp cuckold characters temple, and pull the fucking trigger. This story was a waste of bits and bytes as well as my time.

JUST A WIMP, A SICK STORY

He's not married...just another nutless, spineless quasi-man who actually seems to be more fascinated with another guys dick than his wife. I read for entertainment, for knowledge, for uplifting...didn't find any of that here. There's nothing erotic in this story...whores and wimps are to erotica what pee wee herman is to heroism, they can pretend sometimes but no one is fooled. I hope the author develops some fucking conviction and writes a story with some heart.....

the more they hurt when you kick them or take a fist to one. Husband might have thought about that rather than let his un-loving wife pull this off. Sad man, sad affair. I will keep asking: are their really "men" out their who love their wives to do this to them? Seems unbelievable that he would stick around to be humiliated like that and if he does, then more than his wife, he needs the kind of help that psychologist offers to get back his identity and get rid of the person who does not love him.

Another story in the loving wives category that doesn't have anything resembling a loving wife in it. Why can't there be another place for stories like these...you know, the "sick pathetic nutless bastard with the faithless whore of a wife who will fuck anything, anytime, for any reason" category? Then all those who get off on nauseating crap like this will be happy and the author will get more positive comments. The rest of us "normal" people will be happier too, not reading stories where closet fags jack off into a hanky and give it to another closet fag; that situation doesn't fit with the theme of "loving wives" either, come to think of it.

made the Ass w/o a name bitch again like the pussy he is.

A wimp for a husband, a slut for a wife and an unimaginative, worthless, piss-poor fucking ass for a writer. You are a sick mother fucker.

If your story is meant to inspire orgasms, it works well.

Very hot premise, and well written too. Looking forward to more!

Get some help, if this "shit" resides in the author's mind, then elimination from the gene pool is a justified action.

Husband needs to grow a set of balls and kick her cheating ass out.

It's quite one thing to have your wife fucking other men and you let her but it's quite a different thing when the bastard fucking her taunts you with his very large cock and admits that all he has going for him is a large cock. He taunts the husband and so much as tells him that he is helpless to control his wife from fucking him. The man should have the balls to take the man off and whack him good and then feed him into a tree shredder and feel his remains to the pigs. lacygrayson is a real prick that is trying to taunt the reader with tales f a big cock that he wishes were his. So I say fuck him and feed him to the pigs also.

Hard to follow and very unrealistic. Keep trying, maybe this pile of shit will evenually get better.

to criticize with out insulting the author? The author ? is the one that thinks up these characters. they reside in his mind. This wimp husband resides in his mind also. More than that the asshole is the main resident of his mind. It's what he would really be like if someone wanted to stomp his ass. He probably couldn't handle a six year old so he makes himself real strong in the story. If he hadn't written the husband as such a coward he would have gone down to see him with a baseball bat and then divorced his cheating slut of a wife...

There is a way to leave criticism without being insulting. Criticize the story, not the author. It's fiction, folks. And if if isn't your kind of story just pass it by. Still I have to wonder about all the need for agression and name calling. Those who use it are truly pathetic and small.

You can tell when someone writes stories just what he's like. You are a dumb fuck. How any man can have his wife fucked by a man with a cock much much larger than his and not know it is the height of stupidity on the writers part. I mean even the dullest son will know that his wife is getting loose and he never can touck anything in her but space. As for a dumb ass cuke raising another man's child is something that no real man would do...you can eat my feces anythime as I am sure you are into that. I could tell you that it's protein...hahahaha dumb ass

It's a story. If you don't like it don't read it. There are so many strokes for so many folks, either read it and like it, or move on to as we know so many other stories that you may WANT to read. I personally enjoyed the story, sometimes squirming, because you should, and the rest is just simply what your lifestyle accepts and accommodates. Keep Writing and I'll keep reading. Thanks D.

this was a crack of shit and any man that go for something like this have to be a fool or worst.if there a man that want to do this i got a bullet for him for his head.the writer of this crap is sick.

you just won't recognize it. Divorce the slut and find a good woman somewhere. One who recognizes her obligations under the oaths she took at the marriage ceremony. This one doesn't even remember the ceremony.

Your wife is a great turn on, wild and independent and breaking every sexual taboo....but obviously you can't handle it. Either learn to enjoy watching her with another man, join in, tell her to stop, or divorce her. Doing nothing is silent approval. But I guess you know that, and you approve. You like watching her in action. What's the latest with Cyn???

Learn to enjoy your wife's love for variety. Quit torturing yourself. Lean back and enjoy your beautiful, intelligent and dominant wife. She loves you, but she loves big dicks and breaking taboos even more. More Cyn stories PLEASE!

No man with any self respect would allow what you have in this story to have happen to him or his wife. It is pathetic

is there trust and respect for her hubby.adultery is a divorce in most places for a reason.move on and get a life without her.abuse comes in many forms.

Sounds like much of your story is true. If you love this woman and can't live without her, then maybe you did the best thing. Maybe your faithfulness will outlast her wild period of adultery, then you'll have her all for yourself again. At least you have the satisfaction of knowing how truly sexy and bold your wife really is, and that other men much younger realize what a hot piece of ass she is. By the way, I left your story on my wife's pillow to read last night....she's too straight to ever get involved in an affair. But we fucked like rabbits last night, with her repeatedly asking me if I would like sloppy seconds. She's NEVER shared that fantasy with me. Thanks.

So typical. He cums in his pants while watching his wife get fucked by a bigger dick.

Only a queer would get cum in his pants while watching his wife fuck another man. Only a queer would write such a story since queers like for other men jack off. But there are lots of queers and to each their own; just don't put your queer stories in Loving Wives.

I climaxed reading your story. I read it a second time...and climaxed again.

A good videocam and a divorce lawyer solves the whoole problem. NOONE with a cock could enjoy being in his position.

This is the second story in less than a minute you've trashed.... at least READ them you wanker... or better yet... list your own so we can have OUR say!!!!!

If it were my wife she would be in the street.

I'd blow a big dick off with a .44 or a shotgun.

All u guys who claim to hate this story keep on reading it to the bitter end. Was a gun pointed at your head? If u don't like the TV show your watching why not change the channel, dumb ass! We all like and dislike different things, remember that's what makes life interesting. Just like Mom used to say, if u've got nothing good to say, than say nothing at all. You're attempts to discourage the author, with you're negativity, only shows the fact that you, yourself, may have a curiosity regarding being a cuckold.

Good work lacegrayson, encore please!

I'm guessing "goodwifey" and "dside" are the kind of folks you'd find on a really crappy Jerry Springer episode--cuckholds who don't want to face reality (or the kind of insipid morons you'd find in prison after having cut up their unfaithful spouses into little bitty pieces). Overall, a little too submissive for my tastes, but then again, the whole "loving wives" genre is about that concept in the first place--or confronting one's fears or realities. Don't let those who are afraid to confront their own dissuade you from writing your stories--though, please, work on the grammar...