by WhisperStory
I am really enjoying this string, you've got great writing skills.
Very clever how you intertwine the different elements of the story...
keep up the good work
- evolvedboy
It's been a really long time since we've seen a new installment on this story. I have to admit that the suspense is really agonizing. Your story is one of the most well-written pieces I have seen on this site. Do please continue as soon as you are able!
Plz continue the story. may i make a sugjestion to have mike continue his job as an actor.
More of the awsome on account of all ten parts, so keep it up, yeah?
just read the whole ten parts within a ahlf week and i hope u don?t let it end like this..
this story was the best i?ve ever read...
do me a favor and some others and go on...
i hope the big time pt. 11 is coming out soon i cant get enough of this story
Wonderful stories. My favorite actresses. Please continue the series. It's been 10 months. I know, it's not easy to write a great story, but... Thanks.
Holy cow. I've never done that before.
I just read part I through X starting at 1:00am last night - and now its 9:00pm the next day.
20 straight hours. can you belive it.
what a great story - by far the best i've ever read anywhere online.
This story is by far the best i've read on this web site. It's incredible, awesome writing and all the hottest actresses as well. Please don't stop now!!! can't wait for chapter 11
fortunately Whisper Story has gifted us, the readers of literotica, with this magnificant story :) but unfortunately he has left us sitting on our thumbs waiting for part eleven
:( PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU WRITE MORE!!!!
Can you please write a new chapter and not just leave us hanging. It's easily the best story on the site so please continue it
Oh my god fucking magnificent i just read chapters 1 to 10 in one sitting something i have never done, but don't leave your readers hanging too long, we all want chapter 11 asap. I will give you plenty of props for leaving us eagerly anticipating chapter 11 though
dude seriously how you gonna sit there write write 10 chapters over a period of a yr and then promise a 11th chapter, and i mean come on the las tone was in dec of 2003, i think 4 yrs is enough time to come up with an 11th chapter hell its enought o come up with 200 chapters. wtf seriously thats wrong u could of at least let us know if kirsten and mike get together cause come on thats what everybody wants, oh and by the way theres to much lesbo shit going on theres to be more guy girl action.
Enjoying the fantasy land and cannot get enough. More of the same please. Loved the consentual-rape scene with elisha cuthbert. And the dog.
wow me and my girlfriend spent days and nights reading this amazing story and have had some wild role playing with this story and we want more so please give us more