by bluedragonauthor
Another great chapter. Zofi’s last comment was a jaw dropper. Didn’t expect that at all.
Wow! I never saw the baby thing coming! Totally a Paul Anka moment....
Having my baby
What a lovely way of saying
How much you love me.
I hope that's what's going through Zofi's head anyway...hopefully
@AngusM
Yup, that came out of nowhere
(inb4 reading back to look for clues)
For anyone who can’t wait, the complete story through Chapter 58 is now available on my Patreon page (BlueDragonAuthor).
Damn you BlueDragonAuthor and your glorious cliffhangers. Yet another great story. Keep it up.
Left us right on the edge, didn't you? Whatever happens next, still just plain WOW!!!
Fantastic, brilliantly done. The build to this was done so well will Sam, Belle, Neevie, and Mari all coming before Zofi was well worth the wait. I only hope now that you can knock it out of the park with Alice.
Scores really high with the readers but it is just the same stuff going no where. In the end most of the girls will need to move on. However I am sure our hero will be left with a least one or two. This story doesn’t leave me waiting for the next chapter. Mind you I have read/skimmed them all to date.
First, I'd like to say I'm very impressed. This is pretty classy, all things considered, and it truly is a fine story. A few questions and/or problems: First, he sure has NO IDEA how to distinguish between love and in love. Like ?????
Second, is the bisexual stuff really necessary? It seems to distract from Matty's relationship with the girls, not really add to it.
Nice. Brilliant even. Keeps me coming back for the story and care for the characters. When this series is complete, I have a parallel story suggestion.
How on earth does a member of the BTC remind anyone of the actor who portrayed Natasha and was told on set to add padding? Your credibility dropped 4*!
For everyone still waiting, I submitted Chapters 31-32 a week ago but it got rejected by the mods yesterday. They quoted a line about Belle being a “little girl”. I changed to “pixie” and resubmitted. Hopefully it’ll post sooner than later.
Wow !! It just keeps getting better. Your mind is wonderful. Thanks for sharing !!😊❤️
This is your best chapter so far. I really loved the build up with Zofi starting from the date. I love how sensual the love scene is.
I think this story is AWESOME!!!!!. But when does he get with his mom or Rock's mom or some mom??? Look look
Just one thing, and that's Zofi should have actually waited longer than 2 weeks for her to lose her virginity, as that isn't really long enough for the pill to be effective. 4 weeks is recommended. If she wanted to be really sure, 6 would have been better. So she just might get her wish, perhaps earlier than expected.
WOW. I did not expect that ending. But seriously, how do you come up with all this great stuff? So many of the ideas and characterizations are just spot on. The photos by Sam and the movie references were a great idea. And for the past few chapters I have loved the vignettes with Mattie’s mom. Just amazing.
This chapter ALMOST received a (4)-I am seeing more "small errors" cropping up in the writing; I know the series is all written, but there is some ability to go back and edit.
I have to agree about the repetition, also; Matt gets woken up by a blow-job from whoever is his latest 'sleepover' partner, and he jams his cock into their throat because he is surprised(?!)
As to this chapter; the emotional aspect was really well done, and the date is well-described. Having Sam following and picture-documenting the stages was a god touch, will document for posterity for the whole group.
Zofi wants to get pregnant? Is this gonna be BEFORE or AFTER she goes off to school? And how does her mother feel about this (if she has been consulted)?? Also, really telling comment that Sam broke Zofi's hymen a year before; my opinion-both Zofi and Matt missed out on the "blooding" that accompanies a first time for most girls...I am a 'pervert and enjoy that kind of thing (but have never actually actively broken one mmyself!)
That ending leaves us ready for the next chapter...😀😱😈
2 weeks , 4 weeks whatever . This is fiction . Damn good fiction . And what errors ? Petty . The trademark morning blowjob is genius . Just like everything else .
Well done .
When does she want to have his baby? I would assume after college. Who knows if she will find someone else in the next four years? Also, it is obvious that his Mom enjoys watching her stud son plow his girlfriends and looking at his cock. It seems like a matter of time before she joins the BTC.
Good one. And Mom's reaction to catching Belle was decided different than with Sam. Proving she's scheming (IMO). But, Zofia's pronouncement at the end was a definite eacalation for the future.