All Comments on 'The Birthday Party'

by royalrogue

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MisterteaMisterteaover 7 years ago
A nice idea..

..slightly marred by carelessness (occasionally you confused "his" and "her") and typos.

zazrix9zazrix9over 5 years ago
Awesomely Hawt

What a lucki man, wish it could be me

awyldsideawyldsideover 2 years ago

would have loved to see some strapon play

Hotstuff1PHotstuff1P10 months ago

Brilliant. Super sexy and well written.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Did I miss it? - They never wished him "Happy Birthday"!

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