All Comments on 'The Birthday Present'

by msnomer68

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Tough to finish this story, something in my eye;probably allergies. Gave you a 5, but you deserve a 10.

Be Well and Happy,

Paul

Just_GymJust_Gymover 1 year ago

5 stars. A welcome break from the usual in this category.

Please keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Finally. Something written by an adult.

robroy93robroy93over 4 years ago
Good one

In Loving Wives, these birthday things aren't usually like this. Good story.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Great

What a great story to find here in loving wives. This must have really pissed off the cheating fans.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A real writer is among us -- not the only one, surely -- but a real writer.

Thanks for a good story for some of us "oldies but (still?) goodies." Now, where is my darling wife?

ender2k2kender2k2kover 9 years ago
Wonderful story.

Stories like this make me wish there were different categories for Loving Wives and Unloving Wives. Because it is so hard to sort through the the latter to find the Loving stories. Thank you.

robertlrobertlover 9 years ago
fantastic

It doesn't get any better than this!

bearsladybearsladyalmost 10 years ago

Very well done story of love and sex after years of togetherness. Good sex doesnt just belong to the young and firm.

brujaybrujayalmost 13 years ago
Magnificent!

Thank you, thank you for sharing this beautiful story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Sincerely one of the deepest stories read

As I lay in my bed, your story captivated me from start to finish. The way you describe each detail is as if you were a professional author if you ca say that. Amazing work simply amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Life Is What You Write & Quite Well Indeed

Your touch is as though you have lived it.<P>

And thats comfortable in its showing.<P>

More than good show - Thanks<P>

With Very High Regard

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969about 16 years ago
Again nice story.

Another good story.

Nightowl21Nightowl21almost 20 years ago
A nice story

A good story and erotic love between a husband and wife-----almost unheard of!?

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