All Comments on 'The Birthday Present'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Great work.. I really enjoyed the story well written

CARLVPCARLVP4 months ago

Reminds me of an unplanned similar actual encounter with friends I never suspected were routinely into this scene. Literally they seduced me in their apartment after a surprise meeting in a bar. Was not as embellished and descriptive as this prose but very similar. His wife and I hit it off so well we continued an occasional get together alone in addition.

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