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All Comments on 'The Black Bears Ch. 01'

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ballznall60ballznall60over 13 years ago
Another great moment from,,

Literotica's numero uno expert on cocksucking! Keep it going girl. You rock!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Another winner!

I can't wait until the next chapter!

Oral RexOral Rexover 13 years ago
Good writing!

The development and description at the beginning are well done, setting up some tension, but not too much, then suddenly we suddenly switch in the coach's mind from Lucia the attractive woman to Lucia the cum-slut and the real story starts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Another Great Story

Lucia, once again, proves how great and sensous a fellatrix she is! I can't wait to read what happens in the ensuing chapters. Keep up the great writing and please don't leave out any juicy details, GML. It's great to see you're back again and writing stories to keep any guy hard! Thanks, RCG

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nothing Better

Than having your dick sucked dry by a subserviant little cumslut like Lucia, so the story is a winner!

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I am a Canadian woman with a passion for blowjobs. I love writing erotic fiction. My main area of interest is obviously fellatio, and I like to explore my submissive side. A common theme in my stories is a woman who is initially forced or coerced into sucking cock, but who fu...