(All characters are over 18 years of age.)
Beware to the black cat who crosses her path...
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patrickaj, Ambrill and 9 other people favorited this story!
I have to say, the story was pretty hot, and the VA work was superbly erotic.
However, from a technical standpoint, it comes across very much as a script meant for more than one person. As it stands, it isn't bad, but without even an attempt at a voice for the kitten, it comes across as if the main character is delusional, hearing responses that aren't there. It could easily have been worked out by recording the lines and either using a different voice, or, much simpler, changing your voice in whatever editing software to include even the illusion of someone else being present.
I feel like this is a kick-ass first attempt, between the acting, audio quality, and overall hot story, but it hopefully serves as a learning experience so future works are more polished and feel more like a final product.more...
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