All Comments on 'The Blackballoon Team Ch. 02'

rosalina is a great character, keep it up!!!

The bumbling humor of the A-Team coupled with the good stuff!

It's great that you are back Zaxxon. I love this series, keep it coming.

Keep it coming, Zaxxon. An extremely entertaining read, can't wait for the rest.

Great stuff, keep it coming!

Glad you're writing erotica again, Zaxxon! Your writing style is descriptive, and it's obvious you spent much time proofreading it. It's very easy to see your characters in our mind's eye. I also like how you re-describe the characters' physique in case the reader forgot exactly what they look like.

I know it's a two-part series, but I think most would agree that it would be great to see more from these sensual characters.

-Quox

Looking forward to Ch. 03!

but the first story was better ;) any chance of a third part?

Definitly want a sequel though

Still waiting for a third part in this amazing series, my friend!

MORE! This series is amazing.

fuck i js cummed

You have NO idea how glad I am that "Vertigo" didn't rape "Evilina." I thought it was going there, and I started to go limp. And the last scene made the whole story worthwhile. Dunno if Zaxxon still writes, but if so, yeah, I'd love another chapter of this. Thinking of writing one myself, maybe where "Evilina" escapes while they're fucking, or she's in prison and then offered a chance at parole if she goes undercover for Blackballoon?