All Comments on 'The Blameless Bystander Ch. 10'

Another beautifully written chapter by one of my favorite Writers. Found the ending quite poignant but very realistic. Wonderful on-going story.

AutumnWriter, yet another superbly written chapter to an excellent tale – you are, indeed, one of my favourite authors. This chapter strengthens the premise that "the bigger the lie, the more people will believe it" and it is clear that, without going on to the attack immediately, James and his allies are facing a hard fight to clear his name with the Reverend's sheep. I too find the relationship between James and Vicki to be increasingly poignant. Pete.