All Comments on 'The Blameless Bystander Ch. 11'

AutumnWriter has written another outstanding chapter in this ongoing delightful story. In this chapter he proves once again how sensual and sexy just the art of removing one's clothing can be. As far as removing their clothes; the men readers will love reading the description of the main female character, Tracey as she undresses; just as the women readers should enjoy the male character, James as he disrobes. Written in an intimate and revealing graphic manner ~ this chapter's a winner. Terrific Write. Sexy sensuous read.

Yes, indeed, another excellent chapter in a thoroughly enjoyable story.

Tight writing marked this chapter; you're writing continues to improve, A.W.

How many fascinating twists and turns can one story possess. Like Tracey said, don't think about it, just enjoy it. Ok, I will!

Thank you, A.W.

Wow AutumnWriter, another excellent chapter to, what has been throughout, a superbly written tale of small town intrigue. Some interesting developments! Judith shows a mother's love and superb fighting spirit in her stand against the 'Reverend' and the delectable Tracey shows that she has a heart as well as all the other attributes of a shapely, sexy, sensuous woman. You have us on 'tenterhooks' wondering how this epic will develop. Well done1 Pete.