All Comments on 'The Blizzard'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wonderful Work and Reality

Erotic without obsurdity - nice job - left it open - great theme - more please

Ghost BearGhost Bearover 19 years ago
Did I Read This Right?

A married couple at a swingers party who only had sex with each other? WOW

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
All that writing

And it it was all a waste of your time and energy. Hope no body else tries to read it..It's just plain stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Awesome!

Everyone is entitled to his or her own opinion. it did strike me strange that the couple did not have sex with each other but that's what makes the story extraordinarily wonderful. I...we hope you will write more great stories. Kudos!!!!!!!!!

Joe_DinkJoe_Dinkover 19 years ago
A nice twist

Well done. You presented an interesting twist that made a commonly played theme uncommon. Thanks for a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Outstanding

There is nothing like watching and being watched! Excellent story that parallels our own "soft swinging" experiences. We enjoyed the story very much.

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailover 19 years ago
exabitionist delight~

the blizzard of emotions huh?

wonderful tale...

happy holidays and good luck ^5

Art~

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 19 years ago
Watching

I enjoyed reading your story and I can appreciate the thrill of being watched and watching others. I don't think it's necessary to jump right in if it's your first swinger's party!

I would have liked to read a bit more about that thrill of showing however, but you wrote a good story anyway.

Good luck.

sacksackover 19 years ago
very different....

and probably not to all tastes, but uniquely yours, and I enjoyed it!

cookiejarcookiejarover 19 years ago
So very different...

This is a true loving wife story. She loved and made love to her husband. I expected another group sex scene...kudos to you! Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Nicely done

ALl the very best.

Virtual_BurlesqueVirtual_Burlesqueover 19 years ago
Hot Blizzard . . .

. . . but I feel cheated.

The only time I’ve ever been stranded in a snowstorm it was at a bus station where the patrons exhibited nothing more than the result of their having bad hygiene.

Erotica_WritingsErotica_Writingsover 19 years ago
liked it very much

Thank you for you writings that you give to us to read

English LadyEnglish Ladyover 19 years ago
Very Sexy!

I feel that maybe the end of this was rushed a bit but I loved the premise of the story and I felt it read very realistically. Fantastically wintery too :)

CharleyHCharleyHover 19 years ago
:D

A fine offering for Christmas DP. You vividly captured a storm-ridden winter drive . . . one that I was not looking forward to this Christmas day, and yet, you have made me re-consider it and look at it more as a potential sexual adventure than not ;)

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 19 years ago
So that's why you folks stay up north

And all these years I'd been wondering. Thanks, DP.

randallangdonrandallangdonover 12 years ago
Thanks!

What a great story. I love it when normal people find themselves in unexpectedly exciting situations. Great job!

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