by dreampilot79
Erotic without obsurdity - nice job - left it open - great theme - more please
A married couple at a swingers party who only had sex with each other? WOW
And it it was all a waste of your time and energy. Hope no body else tries to read it..It's just plain stupid.
Everyone is entitled to his or her own opinion. it did strike me strange that the couple did not have sex with each other but that's what makes the story extraordinarily wonderful. I...we hope you will write more great stories. Kudos!!!!!!!!!
Well done. You presented an interesting twist that made a commonly played theme uncommon. Thanks for a good read.
There is nothing like watching and being watched! Excellent story that parallels our own "soft swinging" experiences. We enjoyed the story very much.
the blizzard of emotions huh?
wonderful tale...
happy holidays and good luck ^5
Art~
I enjoyed reading your story and I can appreciate the thrill of being watched and watching others. I don't think it's necessary to jump right in if it's your first swinger's party!
I would have liked to read a bit more about that thrill of showing however, but you wrote a good story anyway.
Good luck.
and probably not to all tastes, but uniquely yours, and I enjoyed it!
This is a true loving wife story. She loved and made love to her husband. I expected another group sex scene...kudos to you! Good luck!
. . . but I feel cheated.
The only time I’ve ever been stranded in a snowstorm it was at a bus station where the patrons exhibited nothing more than the result of their having bad hygiene.
Thank you for you writings that you give to us to read
I feel that maybe the end of this was rushed a bit but I loved the premise of the story and I felt it read very realistically. Fantastically wintery too :)
A fine offering for Christmas DP. You vividly captured a storm-ridden winter drive . . . one that I was not looking forward to this Christmas day, and yet, you have made me re-consider it and look at it more as a potential sexual adventure than not ;)
And all these years I'd been wondering. Thanks, DP.
What a great story. I love it when normal people find themselves in unexpectedly exciting situations. Great job!